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| [https://trello.com/c/618c425dc67ac583faa453e3 DFM Sri Lanka Key Zone identification study] | | [https://trello.com/c/618c425dc67ac583faa453e3 DFM Sri Lanka Key Zone identification study] | ||
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* May be written up as a paper to be submitted for peer review. | * May be written up as a paper to be submitted for peer review. | ||
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+ | 2022-03-30: Update from MOSTAFA: | ||
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+ | <blockquote>We just had along zoom meeting on 28 March, participated by all DFM-BD members. | ||
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+ | We discussed our progress regarding all the DFM deliverables. Among all the deliverables, our first priority are two - the completion of Literature review and the scoping report. Following Derek's comment, we have been working on the two documents. | ||
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+ | In the literature review, that we prepared, somehow was narrowly focused and now we are including a number of additional documents from Zotero Bangladesh folder and also from outside zotero. As we expect, the revised review, we'll submit by April. | ||
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+ | See further correspondence from the team: | ||
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+ | [https://trello.com/1/cards/618c4273318c1f83ecf0dd0f/attachments/62446e3cf33ffd69361941a1/download/DFM_COR_2022-03-30_Bangladesh-lit-review.pdf DFM_COR_2022-03-30_Bangladesh-lit-review.pdf] | ||
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2021-12-21: Message from Mostafa -- "Lit. review will be finalized by 1st week of January. Dr. Taslima is working on. " | 2021-12-21: Message from Mostafa -- "Lit. review will be finalized by 1st week of January. Dr. Taslima is working on. " | ||
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* The report should summarize preliminary findings and outline changes to the research plan that the pilot visits and survey reveal. | * The report should summarize preliminary findings and outline changes to the research plan that the pilot visits and survey reveal. | ||
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+ | 2022-04-25: Response from Amal. | ||
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+ | <blockquote>We will revise the document based on your comments. You may (including yourself and Eric) like to find someone to take forward this to a publishable work. If it requires a few quick visits to some of the markets, we can do that as well. However, let's do it once we have a clear idea of some of the gaps for a research paper. How to thematically position it as a paper is also an important question. I was thinking putting it in the context like " Role of markets in the domestic food system" could be a plausible option. The thematic area would guide us to figure out important literature. | ||
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+ | 2022-04-23: Response from Derek. | ||
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+ | Some of the mark-up is simply to note points that I thought were particularly interesting or valuable. Some of my comments are pointers or thoughts for future research. Others comments are suggestions for small revisions to the report. | ||
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+ | I really like the report. It is very informative, clear, well-written, and provides a first rate example for DFM of the kinds of outputs we were hoping for from the scoping. The figures, tables, and pictures are also excellent supplements to the text. The pictures are great. Really, it’s an excellent piece of work and a great basis for follow up research. | ||
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+ | I don’t expect any significant revisions to the report, but do have several fairly minor requests for changes as follows: | ||
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+ | * Please provide us a version in Word so that we can format the report according to the DFM report template and do a minor language edit. The language overall, though is excellent. Just a few changes to prepositions and other minor edits needed. | ||
+ | * Please insert the tables and figures into the body of the text at appropriate places. It is awkward to have to go back and forth to appendices while reading the report. | ||
+ | * You mention in the introduction and conclusion that this study is one of only a few on dried fish marketing in Karnataka. It would be valuable if you could be more specific. What is the other work? How is the research that you report different from the other references on the subject? | ||
+ | * You state on page 9 that the diversity of species dried has declined yet it still seems that lots of species are being dried. Can you provide any more detail on this decline? | ||
+ | * You note in several places striking declines in the number of processors and traders. Is there any evidence of consolidation and growth in size among the remaining operators? | ||
+ | * You don’t mention online marketing at all. Did this come up in the research, particularly as a response to Covid? | ||
+ | * After such a fine market study, your main recommendation for more infrastructural support to df processors, particularly for better driers, doesn’t seem to fully capture the implications of your careful research. Your research suggests that a major transition is taking place in the dried fish sector that likely requires a more comprehensive evaluation of the drivers of change and probably a multi-faceted response that includes attention to questions of fisheries management, institutional supports for actors and organizations involved in dried fish trading, attention the specific needs of women producers and traders, and consideration of changing consumer preferences. | ||
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+ | I would appreciate it if you could take a small amount of time to consider my suggestions here and my comments on the manuscript. I’d be curious to read your responses to some of my comments in a further layer of mark up from your side on the attached draft along with a second new revised version of the report. I don’t think addressing my suggestions should take much time, and some are just matters for further reflection and work at a later stage. | ||
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+ | [https://trello.com/1/cards/618c42a8d6ddc73f8c8508ee/attachments/6266b8185eaaaa674df6c71f/download/MarketMappingKarnatakaDFM_Final_dj.pdf MarketMappingKarnatakaDFM_Final_dj.pdf] | ||
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2022-03-10: received from Prasanna. | 2022-03-10: received from Prasanna. | ||
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+ | | [https://trello.com/c/618c427ca1f3b25dee4dc9a1 DFM Cambodia scoping report] | ||
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+ | Current ACTION ITEMS for Gayathri | ||
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+ | # Complete revisions of the Scoping Report, addressing structure/signposting and other comments from Derek in the report. | ||
+ | # Urgently submit the SSHRC F300 from CEPA, with signatures by Gayathri and a financial officer, indicating a closing balance of $0 for the 2021-2022 fiscal year. | ||
+ | # Send full-resolution images with an explanatory document containing image descriptions (photographer, locations, dates) OR upload directly following the instructions at https://driedfishmatters.org/wiki/Help:Image_uploader. | ||
+ | # Share a folder with anonymized interview summaries or transcripts and accompanying NVivo data (including codebook) exported in REFI-QDA format. | ||
+ | # Identify data sources for the maps and share a plan for working with RAs to recreate some or all of the maps in the report using GIS tools (based on quantitative or descriptive data). | ||
+ | # Develop an expression of interest, if applicable, for follow-up research in Cambodia. | ||
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+ | 2022-03-02: Gayathri writes back. Promises to have a revised version by the end of next week. | ||
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+ | 2022-02-23: Derek writes to Gayathri. | ||
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+ | 2022-02-08: Gayathri promises to finalize the report in the next couple of weeks. | ||
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+ | Waiting for revisions... | ||
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+ | 2021-05-25: Revised outline sent by Gayathri (DFM_RPT_KHM-Scoping-revised-outline) | ||
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+ | 2021-04-21: Editorial meeting (Gayathri, Derek, Eric) | ||
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+ | 2021-02-20: Draft submitted by Gayathri Lokuge (DFM_RPT_KHM-Scoping-report_DRAFT.docx) | ||
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| [https://trello.com/c/618c42a9eb90084450e0bd17 Scoping report] | | [https://trello.com/c/618c42a9eb90084450e0bd17 Scoping report] | ||
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* Should provide a detailed presentation of hypotheses, methods, results, and implications/applications of the findings. | * Should provide a detailed presentation of hypotheses, methods, results, and implications/applications of the findings. | ||
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+ | 2022-04-21: Written, and with professional language editing service. | ||
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2022-01-31: Dilanthi: | 2022-01-31: Dilanthi: | ||
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* Analysis of drivers of change and perceptions of major threats and opportunities facing the sector | * Analysis of drivers of change and perceptions of major threats and opportunities facing the sector | ||
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+ | 2022-03-30: Response from MOSTAFA. | ||
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+ | <blockquote>We just had along zoom meeting on 28 March, participated by all DFM-BD members. | ||
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+ | We discussed our progress regarding all the DFM deliverables. Among all the deliverables, our first priority are two - the completion of Literature review and the scoping report. Following Derek's comment, we have been working on the two documents. | ||
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+ | The scoping report...we are revising following Derek's feedback and will be finalized soon. Now the JU Team and BAU team are working separately on the deliverable and the two team will work jointly and exclusively on the DFM-BD for three days - 17, 18 and 19 April in JU campus. | ||
+ | </blockquote> | ||
+ | TASLIMA adds: | ||
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+ | <blockquote>Regarding scoping report, along with Professor Mostafa, I like to add that, we received a comment on December 31, 2021, however, four JU members got COVID in January. It took time to recover, then we got busy with the year-ending exams. We will try to finish the tasks but I think, we have to do them one at a time. I hope you will understand. | ||
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Derek sent extensive comments December 31 | Derek sent extensive comments December 31 | ||
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* Analysis of how numbers of actors/volumes of dried fish/dried fish prices have changed within the past decade. | * Analysis of how numbers of actors/volumes of dried fish/dried fish prices have changed within the past decade. | ||
* Analysis of drivers of change and perceptions of major threats and opportunities facing the sector. | * Analysis of drivers of change and perceptions of major threats and opportunities facing the sector. | ||
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Latest revision as of 10:10, 24 May 2022
This document is part of the Dried Fish Matters Monitoring, Evaluation, and Learning workflow. Deliverables listed here are taken from the Terms of Reference (Schedule B) of contracts between the University of Manitoba and partner organizations for Scoping Research.
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DFM Sri Lanka Key Zone identification study |
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2020-12-20: Published online. DFM_RPT_LKA-Key-zone-study.pdf 2020-12-20: Received from Oscar Amarasinghe. Received as PDF; no further editorial work. |
2020-03-14 |
DFM Myanmar MPLSC dataset and preliminary analysis |
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2022-02-10: Postpone asking about this until we know if AIT students will use the dataset. 2021-08-06: Status unknown. Datasets may already be available with NAG? |
2020-03-20 |
DFM Sri Lanka policy study |
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2020-11-15: Published online. DFM_RPT_LKA-policy-analysis_FINAL.pdf 2020-11-05: Copy-edited by Eric Thrift. DFM_RPT_LKA-policy-analysis_FINAL.docx 2020-02-20: Received from Oscar Amarasinghe. |
2020-03-28 |
DFM Bangladesh literature review |
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2022-03-30: Update from MOSTAFA:
See further correspondence from the team: DFM_COR_2022-03-30_Bangladesh-lit-review.pdf 2021-12-21: Message from Mostafa -- "Lit. review will be finalized by 1st week of January. Dr. Taslima is working on. " FINAL REVIEW 2021-04-21 Created links to Zotero, Steven Smeltz. DFM_RPT_BGL-literature-review-Zotero-links_2021-04-21.docx 2020-10-31: Final draft submitted. DFM_RPT_BGL-literature-review_2020-10-31.docx |
2020-04-16 |
DFM Sri Lanka Development interventions study |
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2020-11-15: Published online. DFM_RPT_LKA-development-interventions_FINAL.pdf 2020-11-12: Copy-edited by Eric. DFM_RPT_LKA-development-interventions_FINAL.docx 2020-02-20: Received from Oscar Amarasinghe |
2020-04-19 |
DFM Bangladesh key locations report |
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2022-03-04: Released -- wiki, Zotero, online bibliography, blog, Twitter. 2022-02-11: @waewinkhaing -- please create a summary document. See the instructions under the Myanmar consumption survey. 2022-12-21: "Final" document shared by Mostafa. DFM_RPT_BGL-Key-location-report_FINAL-DRAFT_2021-12-21.docx 2021-12-20: Updated report shared by Taslima. DFM_RPT_BGL-Key-location-report_comments_DJ_08.09.21_mostafa_25.10.21[10327_JU20.12.2021.docx] Previous version shared by Mostafa within the BGL team 2021-10-26, addressing comments from Derek. 2021-09-08: Response from Derek. Suggestions: (1) The addition of a short statement of methodology that explains how the data for the report were gathered, by whom, and using what methods. (2) A glossary of key Bangla terms used in the report. (3) There is some inconsistency in use of terms and spellings in the report. It would be ideal if these were to be harmonized. DFM_RPT_BGL-Key-location-report_comments_2021-09-08.docx 2021-08-06: Still on Derek's desk. TODO: Derek send comments to Taslima by 2021-08-11. 2021-04-08: Preliminary comments by Derek. DFM_RPT_BGL-Key-location-report_comments_2021-09-08.docx 2021-03-27: Draft received from Taslima. |
2020-05-06 |
DFM Myanmar consumption survey |
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2022-03-02: Converted to PDF; generated cover; uploaded summary to WordPress. @waewinkhaing Thanks for the summary! Dried Fish consumption in Myanmar_Summary.docx 2022-02-11: @waewinkhaing -- please create a synopsis of this report for the DFM blog. We need around 200-300 words of text, and one or two images. It can be written like a press release, identifying the people who were involved in preparing the reports, the key findings (maybe as a list of bullet points?), and a summary of why/to whom the report will be valuable. Please attach the synopsis file to this card as an attachment. Thanks! 2022-02-07: Wae Win states this integrates the Literature Review. This is the FINAL draft. DFM Myanmar Consumption report_4 Nov_BB_Final.docx 2021-10-15: Status update from Wae Win. Work on the report is continuing; a version will be presented in the e-book as Dried Fish Consumption in Myanmar; Wae Win will upload images. DFM Myanmar Consumption report_4 Nov_BB_Final.docx 2021-08-06: TODO - Eric check with Ben about finishing the report, including options for involving Si Thu. 2021-05-21: Images and text imported to wiki by Steven Smeltz. DFM Myanmar consumption survey 2021-03-18: Forwarded by Ben Belton. "I was able to ask an intern to have a first go at editing Sithu’s report on dried fish consumption in Myanmar – it still needs some refining, adding a proper introduction and conclusion, and some contextualization using secondary sources (e.g. need to compare the levels of consumption reported here with those reported elsewhere), but it is a good start." DFM_RPT_MMR-Consumption-survey_2021-03-18.docx 2020-12-11: First draft completed by Si Thu |
2020-05-16 |
VSS Review of literature on dried fish in India's northeastern states |
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Ask U of M RA (KEVIN) to go through bibliography and upload references to Zotero (i.e., within the Scoping Report) 2021-10-05: Mizoram and Manipur literature review embedded within the Scoping Report. Could be analyzed further in a subsequent document, following the Scoping research. 2020-09: Email exchange between Ramachandrudu and Derek, "Summary of Review of Literature on the Dried Fish in North Eastern States of India- reg". See message forwarded by Derek 2020-10-27. Report to be filed for internal circulation. |
2020-06-07 |
DFM Sri Lanka literature review |
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2021-04-05: Final edits incorporated by Eric Thrift. Source text and images are in the wiki; contents listed at DFM Sri Lanka literature review. 2021-04-04: Final draft submitted by Dilanthi Koralagama 2021-01-16: Copy-edited by Steven Smeltz 2020-11-15: Submitted by Dilanthi Koralagama, with acknowledgements to Nireka Weeratunge and Oscar Amarasinghe |
2020-07-01 |
DFYWA Fishmeal and dried fish in Andhra Pradesh report |
2021-08-25: Revised draft received from Dasu. DFM-DFYWA_RPT_Living-on-the-edge_2021-08-25.docx . "I am attaching the final report as prepared by Mr Venkatesh with this mail. You may please get the DFM and SSHRC logos added on the cover as you suggested and upload it on the DFM website. Please send the link once it has been published digitally so we can start sharing it to other interested parties." 2021-07-16: Reviewer comments from Derek to Dasu. See "appraisal". "I think there’s real potential for an academic publication from the report. I realize this may not be your priority, but I would be happy to discuss options for helping you to transform it into an academic article if you were interested. Ratana is also putting together an e-book on outputs from the scoping phase of the project for a public audience, and we’d love to include a short piece from DFYWA in that. The volume will be free and written in accessible language, with lots of illustrations, so should be a good way to get our preliminary findings out." DFM-DFYWA_RPT_Living-on-the-edge_DRAFT-01_comments-DJ.docx 2021-04-22: Draft received from Dasu |
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DFM Mizoram and Manipur scoping report |
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2022-01-13: Derek requests that we suspend the Zotero work. Derek will write to Ramachandrudu with comments from this report, to guide the Telangana deliverables. 2022-01-11: Sent to Wae Win. TASK: https://trello.com/c/KXtGT3lZ/17-fix-zotero-references-in-mm-report 2021-10-05: Comments from Derek. Suggestion to add more empirical description of value chain and links to primary demographic data, which should be provided. To be copy-edited with DFM Central; send specific questions to Ramachandrudu as they emerge DFM_RPT_VSS_Scoping-NE-States-of-India_2021-06_DJ.doc 2021-08-06: Under review. TODO: Derek to complete review by 2021-08-11; schedule copy editing (language and presentation) 2021-06-14: Draft report submitted. DFM_RPT_VSS_Scoping-report.doc |
2021-02-02 |
DFM Thailand Review of government policies related to dried fish |
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2021-04-30 | |
DFM Thailand literature review |
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Check with NOVA. This report can focus on analysis of secondary data, not just publications specifically related to dried fish. It will be useful to have market data, etc., in a distinct report prior to the final Scoping report. 2021-03-12: Few Thai publications discovered by the team. Available literature was used in guiding the scoping research. NOVA is working on this. |
2021-05-15 |
DFM West Bengal Markets and market segments overview |
This corresponds to "Scoping Report #1" from the original TOR.
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@ericthrift Thanks! I hope you don't mind that the findings are with bullet points. I have finished Bangladesh key location report two weeks ago, just in case you missed it. @waewinkhaing I think 650 words should be OK. I should have time to format and send out the report today or tomorrow. Thanks! Dried Fish in West Bangal_Summary.docx This summary is a bit long because the original report has a lot of points to cover. The current word count of the summary is approx. 650. Let me know if you want me to trim it down. 2022-02-11: @waewinkhaing -- please create a summary document. See the instructions under the Myanmar consumption survey. 2022-02-10: FINAL REVISION https://driedfishmatters.org/files/DFM_RPT_IITK_Revised-Scoping-Report_2022-02-09.docx 2022-01-14: Comments from Eric
DFM_MEM_Comments-West-Bengal-report-01.docx 2022-02-09: Updated file received from Raktima.
https://driedfishmatters.org/files/DFM_RPT_IITK_Revised-Scoping-Report-01_2021-11-26.docx 2022-01-14: Comments sent by Eric to the DFM West Bengal team. Now move to copy-editing and prepare release. 2022-01-03: Update from Raktima. Revisions are in DFM_RPT_WBG-Scoping-01_2021-06.pdf 2021-12-03: Comments from Derek.
https://driedfishmatters.org/files/DFM_RPT_IITK_Revised-Scoping-Report-01_2021-11-26.docx 2021-10-18: Comments from Derek.
2021-08-18: Updated draft received from Raktima. https://driedfishmatters.org/files/DFM_RPT_WBG-Scoping-01_2021-08-18.docx DFM_RPT_WBG-Scoping-01_Comments-DJ_2021-06_Explanations.pdf 2021-07-19: Returned to Jenia with comments from Derek. Requested section addressing methods. DFM_RPT_WBG-Scoping-01_Comments-DJ_2021-06.pdf 2021-06-27: Draft received from Jenia. DFM_RPT_WBG-Scoping-01_2021-06.pdf |
2021-06-15 |
DFM Thailand summary report on dried fish value chain governance |
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2021-09-01 | |
DFM Thailand scoping report |
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2022-01-24: Received from Ratana.
2022-02-10: Update from Ratana.
Proposal to review the agreement / research plan at that time, potentially reconsidering the role for Nova due to travel restrictions imposed by MUN. Derek proposes organizing a webinar. 2021-03-12: Most field research completed, other than East coast and two provinces under lockdown near Bangkok. Expected completion in April 2021. 2021-03: Agreed to combine "Report on rapid appraisal of dried fish value chains" into the Scoping report, with reflection on the contribution of “pre-Scoping” exploratory research to the data process. Suggested to provide some figures and tables prior to the final report, to assist comparative study. Specifically: list of fish species, table of imported/exported products, geographic data (for mapping in late 2021). |
2021-11-15 |
DFM Andhra Pradesh Report on the secondary data analysis |
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See the e-book contribution? | 2021-12-01 |
DFM Gujarat literature review |
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2021-12-30 | |
DFM Gujarat policy review |
DFM Gujarat policy review_Summary.docx Hi Eric @ericthrift Since the original report is a descriptive analysis of policies and schemes, I am afraid that major points that I got from the report might not be agreed. Could you please check? If you think I have to go through it again, please let me know. I am happy to go through it again. 2022-03-07: Received the updated Appendix 3 table from Tara. Generated PDF; added to Zotero library. To be posted on the blog once the summary is ready. @ericthrift Hi Eric, I have not finished this one. I do not work this week because I have a presentation for Derek on Tuesday. I am planning to work on this one next week. 2022-03-04: Waiting for updated appendix table (export figures) from Tara. @waewinkhaing Hi Wae Win, do you have a summary for this one as well? @ericthrift -- Got it, thank you! I will start working on them from Monday. 2022-02-11: @waewinkhaing -- please create a summary document. See the instructions under the Myanmar consumption survey. 2022-01-13: Follow-up exchange between Eric and Tara. The May 02 version (with copy-edits by Steven) can be considered final. Requested citation checks on p. 9, p. 10, and table 3 as noted in the comments. Suggested releasing the report in the first week of February; offered to write a 1-2 page lay summary for the blog if Tara does not have time; proposed a 45-minute presentation (25-minute presentation of the report followed by 15-20 minutes discussion). 2022-01-12: @ericthrift check with Tara. Himani was asking about the report, but we're not sure if Tara is still working on it? This was returned to Tara and Himani 2021-03-09 with a request from Derek for some minor revisions. 2021-05-02: (UPDATED): Edited report returned by Tara. "As Steven Smelz starts working on this draft I will also give it a complete reading. I am sure Himani will also find some time to read the draft." Derek responded that the report should not require further substantive revisions. 2021-09-08. With TARA for revision; working on the report. 2021-05-10: Zotero references checked/added by Steven Smeltz; text copyedited based on version from Tara. Still need to insert some missing citations DFM_RPT_GUJ-policy-review_copyedits-SS_2021-06-04.docx 2021-03-09: Returned to authors with comments by Derek:
DFM_RPT_GUJ-policy-review_comments-DJ_2021-06-07.docx 2020-12-03: Draft (“reworked paper”) received from Tara Nair DFM_RPT_GUJ-policy-review_2020-03-27.docx 2020-01-12: First draft |
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Report on marine fish landings in Karnataka |
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2022-02-17: Sent by Prasanna.
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2022-02-28 |
DFM Karnataka production and market survey |
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2022-04-25: Response from Amal.
2022-04-23: Response from Derek. Some of the mark-up is simply to note points that I thought were particularly interesting or valuable. Some of my comments are pointers or thoughts for future research. Others comments are suggestions for small revisions to the report. I really like the report. It is very informative, clear, well-written, and provides a first rate example for DFM of the kinds of outputs we were hoping for from the scoping. The figures, tables, and pictures are also excellent supplements to the text. The pictures are great. Really, it’s an excellent piece of work and a great basis for follow up research. I don’t expect any significant revisions to the report, but do have several fairly minor requests for changes as follows:
I would appreciate it if you could take a small amount of time to consider my suggestions here and my comments on the manuscript. I’d be curious to read your responses to some of my comments in a further layer of mark up from your side on the attached draft along with a second new revised version of the report. I don’t think addressing my suggestions should take much time, and some are just matters for further reflection and work at a later stage. MarketMappingKarnatakaDFM_Final_dj.pdf 2022-03-10: received from Prasanna. |
2022-03-05 |
DFM Bangladesh report on food security and nutrition |
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2022-03-16 | |
Methodological summary document |
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2022-03-21 | |
DFM Gujarat field survey compilation |
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2022-03-31 | |
DFM Gujarat report on the rapid survey on dried fish value chains in Gujarat |
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2022-01-18: Email update from Tara. Setback due to COVID but the report preparation is on track.
2022-01-10: Email from Tara -- "The scoping surveys in Gujarat are all over. Currently, data entry is going on. I will mail the progress reports in a couple of days." 2021-02-22: Reviewed by Derek DFM_RPT_GUJ_Jafrabad-Note-based-on-rapid-scoping-study-pilot_DJ.docx 2021-02-18: Jafrabad rapid scoping research completed; field report submitted. DFM_RPT_GUJ_Jafrabad-Note-based-on-rapid-scoping-study-pilot.docx |
2022-03-31 |
DFM Andhra Pradesh Report on the primary data analysis by CESS |
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2022-04-30 | |
DFM Sri Lanka fisher and producer focus group reports |
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2022-05-13 | |
DFM Cambodia scoping report |
Current ACTION ITEMS for Gayathri
2022-03-02: Gayathri writes back. Promises to have a revised version by the end of next week. 2022-02-23: Derek writes to Gayathri. 2022-02-08: Gayathri promises to finalize the report in the next couple of weeks. Waiting for revisions... 2021-05-25: Revised outline sent by Gayathri (DFM_RPT_KHM-Scoping-revised-outline) 2021-04-21: Editorial meeting (Gayathri, Derek, Eric) 2021-02-20: Draft submitted by Gayathri Lokuge (DFM_RPT_KHM-Scoping-report_DRAFT.docx) |
2022-05-30 | |
Scoping report |
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2022-07-01 | |
DFM Andhra Pradesh Report or chapter |
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2022-08-01 | |
DFM Bangladesh policy inventory and gap analysis report |
The report should be approximately 20-30 pages, not including technical appendices, and should include the following elements:
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Not yet started? | 2022-08-02 |
DFM Sri Lanka nutrition study |
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2022-04-21: Written, and with professional language editing service. 2022-01-31: Dilanthi:
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2022-08-19 |
DFM Telangana Scoping study |
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@ericthrift Send sample reports to Ramachandrudu | 2022-09-01 |
DFM Sri Lanka wholesale and retail research report |
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2022-10-26 | |
DFM Andhra Pradesh Report on value chains including the retail segment |
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2022-11-01 | |
DFM Andhra Pradesh Field Survey on value chains including the retail segment |
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2022-11-01 | |
DFM Gujarat report on value chain financing of dried fish |
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2022-11-30 | |
DFM Gujarat financing survey compilation |
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2022-11-30 | |
DFM Bangladesh scoping report |
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2022-03-30: Response from MOSTAFA.
TASLIMA adds:
Derek sent extensive comments December 31 DJ-response-to-BGL-Scoping.pdf 2021-12-31: Received from Mostafa.
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2022-12-02 |
DFM Sri Lanka scoping report |
A 50-60 page scoping report, including (but not limited to) the following elements:
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2022-04-20: Scoping report is complete, with Nireka for editing | 2022-12-15 |
DFM Gujarat report on consultative workshop on Dried Fish in Gujarat |
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2022-12-30 |